A fair effort
I saw some effort on your part. As you said in your comments, you worked really hard on this. For that, I decided you deserved some criticism. You're a really good artist, but there's more to flash than just brush/fill/brush/fill. Learn more about effects and art in flash. Submitting random FBF drawing sequences will really get you nowhere on Newgrounds. Not very often do you see a movie like this placing daily. But you did manage to get a green 3.00+ score on a movie made in one day. That's something to be proud of.
I'm giving you a four because of your hard work.